Hi there,
Today we are talking about making a poem of how I felt on the moon. I felt very scared because the moon was moving around. I hope you enjoy my little poem.
Kueni here from the Summer Learning Journey. I hope you are having an awesome afternoon. I am so excited to be reading another one of your awesome blog posts.
I really enjoyed reading your blog post about how you would feel if you were in Neil Armstrong's shoes, being the first human to land on the moon. What an awesome poem you have put together, the rhyming you have used is very subtle but also works really well when describing how you would feel.
I really like the detail you used in your poem. I especially like when you compare being on the moon to jumping on a trampoline or like a kangaroo.. If you travelled to the moon, what is something that you would take with you and leave on the moon as a memoir?
Keep up the hard work, I look forward to reading more of your blog posts!
Fakalofa lahi atu Fatafehi,
ReplyDeleteKueni here from the Summer Learning Journey. I hope you are having an awesome afternoon. I am so excited to be reading another one of your awesome blog posts.
I really enjoyed reading your blog post about how you would feel if you were in Neil Armstrong's shoes, being the first human to land on the moon. What an awesome poem you have put together, the rhyming you have used is very subtle but also works really well when describing how you would feel.
I really like the detail you used in your poem. I especially like when you compare being on the moon to jumping on a trampoline or like a kangaroo.. If you travelled to the moon, what is something that you would take with you and leave on the moon as a memoir?
Keep up the hard work, I look forward to reading more of your blog posts!
Kueni :)